Branded Theif

By Zexmaxwell on May 28th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Medium
Color: Purple
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Since I got the branded backpack. I wanted everything to match it.


Comments


hashmonkey_2501
Wanderer
love it :D
2016-05-29 2:13

AnaChronism
Fashion Guru
While I really love the idea of the look I am a little bit disappointed by the execution.
First of all your armour mix is not very exciting. There are too many Strider's armour pieces and especially the top is one of the most overused items in the game though I think you could keep at least this skin but change the pants since I am not getting any corruped vibes from those.
The scarlet skins are not a bad choice especially since they are spikey but I don't really understand why you went for this headpiece in particular.
The dyes are a little bit too boring. Only two dyes and you used shadow violet on mostly every dye slot there is. Try to make a bit more interesting colourscheme instead of being stuck with only two colours!
As for your screens- they are way too dark and your character is barely noticable. Please try to find the right light conditions and maybe better places around the area you were taking screens and also more screens are always welcome.
2016-05-29 7:12

Zexmaxwell
Wanderer
Thank you for the pointers! It was worth a shot and I already learned so much. I'll play with the outfit more.
2016-05-29 20:55 in reply to AnaChronism