Locusts Swarm

By Kulf on May 23rd, 2016
Race: Charr
Gender: Male
Armor: Light
Color: Green
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It's alright, they're just gonna lick you.


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Hylek
Fashionista
Please put some effort in presentation.
Literally all you did was uploading one picture and writing one sentence ...
And its even hard to get an impression of your armor in that one screen.
First of all you should specify your armor, dyes and weapons. Then you should take several good screenshots with nice poses and cool locations (the one screen you have is quite cool ... but as the only screen you have, i really cannot appreciate it) and lastly you should add one screen from char-select or hero panel where we can see the outfit in neutral light!
Right now this is a very lazy upload, which i simply cannot give any good votes :(
2016-05-23 11:26

Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
Basically everything that Hylek said, nothing more to add there
2016-05-23 11:57

Kulf
Wanderer
Thanks fer feedback, updated with more information!
2016-05-23 14:17

Hylek
Fashionista
Now that i can see the comb fully i have to say it looks really nice!
Im a bit unsure about the dyes tho, i feel it would look better with a more natural brownish dye instead of the "frost" dye. If you have "Charred" id strongly recommend it. Also some golden accents on the pants would look nice i think!
The backpiece that you specified doesnt really fit the look tho imo! The colour-scheme is too different. You could try match the backpieces colours or decide not to show it.
Seeing the look now makes me even more sad that you didnt put more effort in presentation because it looks very promising!
Id recommend to work a bit more on the dyes, find some fitting weapons and take some nice screens ... then upload it all as version 2.0!
2016-05-24 13:27