Scholar Magus

By trollmenter on May 23rd, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Light
Color: Multi
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weapons:
Chaos Dagger
Knowledge is power - Focus

A lone scholar trying to teach the ways of magic to simpletons in the edge of the mists!


Comments


Hylek
Fashionista
The look itself is very nice!
The presentation leaves me wanting tho :/
You have 4 screens ... all from pvp (which i dislike already, because it has nothing to offer in terms of nice background imo), your description is quite short and if you specify your weapons you dont even need the first half of it, and last but least pls specify your dyes!
With a good presentation this couldve been a gold look imo ... but this way i have to give you a silver :S
2016-05-23 11:03

jesandsteven
Fashion Guru
I like your armor combo. White and gold is overly used, however the more natural muted colors is awesome. I'm with Hylek, a better presentation would be a gold look.
2016-05-23 11:29

Tetrama
Fashion Guru
Armor combo is great, very regal and classy. Dyes are nothing special, at the very least I would suggest trying to mix in a third dye (if the armor pieces allow that, at least).

And yeah, some more screens and listing the dyes you used would go a long way to improving the presentation here.
2016-05-23 18:58

trollmenter
Stylist
Yeah you are right! as a start i will put the dyes and then i will put more screens from beautiful landscapes
2016-05-23 19:25 in reply to Hylek

trollmenter
Stylist
Tried mixing a third but it wasn't the outcome that i wanted maybe if i try a little bit more but a start i ve placed the dyes that i ve used
2016-05-23 19:26 in reply to Tetrama

Tetrama
Fashion Guru
I see now you've got more variation in the dyes than I gave credit for, so I take back part of my earlier comment. If I may still make a suggestion, though, it would be to at least see how it would look if you swapped the Charred dye on the chestpiece for a different, subdued color. Maybe something blue to match the blue gems on the gloves/boots?
2016-05-24 1:12 in reply to trollmenter

trollmenter
Stylist
I wanted something on the inside that wouldn't stand out blue,red and colors like that take much of the emphases from the rest arrmor which i didn't want! :) thank you for the help
2016-05-24 2:13 in reply to Tetrama