The Personification of Death
By PatoSwag
on May 21st, 2016  |
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Its my first look ^^.
Comments
 Pattou Fashion Guru | First of all, welcome here ! Well the mix is good, but the colors are boring. It's just all black and we see a lot of black necromancer already. Something else would have been good. Maybe some dark green, or a swamp look could be good or something more shaman ? Add more screens and a longer description too, it helps your look to be rated better. |
| 2016-05-21 18:09 | |
 AnaChronism Fashion Guru | A huge welcome from me, as well o/ Pattou kinda said it all. One dye for every slot is a very boring choice and it takes away a lot of details on your armour which is a shame actually because the armour mix itself is not bad at all. I am not entirely sure if the Reaper's Hood is too necessary and I think that there are a bit more interesting headpieces that would at least fit to the rest of your armour. Right now it looks a little bit random to me. Also, more screenshots are always nice! If you are unsure how and what kind of screens you wanna take, just take a look at other stylists here and get a bit of a reference how to make diverse and interesting screens. Description is as important as the screens, basically it's about how you present your character. You don't have to write an extremly long story but a small description and what your intentions where when you created this look is always nice to read ^^ You can also always specify your weapons, as well and a small advice: If you are doing more screens, don't forget to take a screen in the character selection- area, as well so everyone could take a better look and your armour and the dyes you used in a neutral light! If you are following those steps you are good to go and i am sure that your character is capable of getting a gold- vote :3 Just go wild and get creative! ^^ |
| 2016-05-22 7:15 |