|Nice story :D Waiting for more screens.|
|I think the boots not match with others and your dye scheme make your sylvari looks like a cute nerd.|
|@Elenoob: Haha, "cute nerd" is so true. I went a bit anti-thesis there with a mismatch look. The boots are meant to be rugged and practical. It's magnetized for easy walking on aircrafts - stemming from her occupation as an engineer. At the same time, her second job is to infiltrate and investigate. So it helps to look like a civilian and not as a fighter.|
|I love how she looks on the screenshots|
|That's reasonable.You deserve a gold :D|
|While I love the effort you put into the story and the screens (which are really superb I have to say!), I really don´t click with the dye choices at all|
For me they actually ruin the armour choices you made a bit, as they make everything feel really disconnected from each other and from the overall theme you were going for
As for the shoulders: they´d feel off to me if it weren´t for HOPE, so I´ll let that slide, but the bright yellow hipster glasses are just so out of place
I always find it hard to really incorporate glasses into a look in GW and this again is a case for me where they feel extremely off
As I said, the presentation and idea behind it is funny and creative, but the glasses and the dye job kinda keep me from giving a gold :/
|She is awesome ! I love the armor you chose exept for the shoulders, but it's personal. The colors, screens, and story are very good !!|
The only thing I don't get is, why did you use the glasses ? They really don't fit here imo.
But still, you can have my gold c:
|I like your story and the overall concept.|
The armour itself is not too but though I am not a big fan of the boots here at least not for this look and I have to agree that the glasses are a bit off here. The colour itself is not really fitting and I think she doesn't really need those nerdy things to look great.
Your screens are amazing I really like their diversity and beauty BUT here I again have to agree that your dyescheme is a little bit disconneting and a little bit weird imo. I think some more natural colours would do you a huuge favour than those colourful splashes here and there that don't seem to fit very well together.
Overall I like the direction you were going for and I think you did a good job capturing some nice screens and creating a neat story for your character but some tiny improvements are still neccessary and would bring you an easy Gold!