|For being knew here you really made some beautiful and outstanding screens. They are very diverse and unique and I like them a lot!|
Now to the look: I actually really like your armour mix it looks very interesting and I especially like the Profane Boots. One thing I would have changed are the gloves I don't think that they are really fitting to the rest of your armour and seem to be a little bit out of place.
I like that you incorperated the backpiece it looks interesting and fits your story which I like, as well!
The only thing I am confused about are the dyes. I see that you wanted to match your Sylvari but I think for a more cyber- or aviatorish look I would have taken some different dyes here maybe more natural tones with some subtile dashes of a bright colour right now the pink combined with the very bright blue doesn't really fit well together.
But all in all it's an interesting look and I see that you took some effort that should be rewarded :3
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|Why not both?|
The colourscheme is definitely not what takes away the steampunk feeling!
Though i have to agree with Kestrel to some extend. What really doesnt fit the steampunk theme for me, are the gloves and shoulders! The Sorrows Embrace shoulders couldve worked here maybe. They look a bit like a jetpack ;D
Despite not hitting the theme 100%, i LOVE your creativity!!!! The idea of a steampunk aviator is absolutely gorgeous and mixing that idea with some sort of hero-theme is genious!
Your presentation alone is worth Gold! The story is quite cool and your screens are so damn awesome! For your first upload the screens really have TOP quality!!! It actually looks like you know exactly how to take perfect screens! :P
Armorcomb could be better, especially fitting the theme more imo.
Dyes are actually quite nice, i love that they are sth. different!
Screens, story and overall presentation are super Gold!
And the idea is simply amazing!!!
Gold from me! :D
|Thank you for suggestions.I'll try sth to fix it as I could. :)|
Btw after I submit this look for contest ,It can't edit?
|This kinda reminds me of Pharah from Overwatch lol interesting armor comb and dye scheme.|
|Not a big fan of the dye scheme.|
|Wow, you really made a great overall upload here!|
The screens are fantastic regarding composition and diversity of locations and poses and you made a lovely story to tie everything together which I highly appreciate!
When it comes to the armour mix, it´s pretty solid, shoulders feel a bit off, but it´s overall a neat mix that has some victorian feel to it
Where I have to agree with pretty much all of the other commenters is the dye scheme; while I love the Deep Maple in combiantion with the Antique Gold, the Spring Tide in there just doesn´t work for me and pretty much destroys the Victorian/Steampunk-y vibe for me
Since the rest of your look is so great though it still makes an overall gold for me
|I took some edits from suggestions. |
I tried to mix SoE shoulders with this look but it overlaps with wings.
Dye scheme later :D
|wow ! I'm not a big fan of sylvari, but your character looks amazing ! i really like armor mix and dyes that you used here :). And your screenshots ? Beautiful ! Can't wait to see more !|
|What's awesome about these contests is that it brings people out that maybe wouldn't have shared otherwise. Thank you so much for sharing your awesome character. She is very unique and looks to me to have a neat cyberpunk or technopunk feel. Well done!|