|He definitely looks steampunkish!|
I love the hairstyle with this eye-thingy, looks great! Your armor-comb is very nice too! Top and legs have this victorian style, while the rest of your armor is technical ... very fitting for a steampunk look!
Im not 100% sure about the dyes though :S
The metal parts wouldve looked better in a rusty tone imo, bronze or a dark gold. Also the orange dye looks a bit out of place to me. Beige or another brown hue wouldve looked better imo.
Your presentation however is absolutely awesome! The screens are very diverse and have nice scenery and you put great effort in the story!
So even though the dyes are not my taste, the armor comb fits the theme perfectly and the presentation is perfect! Gold for you :)
|Thank you Hylek for your comment :) I'm glad you like is armor combo and the hair :) I could go with a brass for the metal parts since rusty looking wouldn't be good seeing as rust would mean the parts wouldn't be working right but Brass is certainly used in steampunk and Victorian era. I went with steel to contrast the leather looking parts, but I definitely see your point and I did have a hard time picking the colours for him.|
|I like the overall look. Your armour looks neat and I feel the steampunk vibe here very well it's really different and unique in comparison to many other looks I've seen in the past few days. I especially love the chestpiece it's really one of my favourites.|
Your screens are as well very cool and I like the diversity and especially the action shots are really cool. The title screen is one of my favourites!
While I like the overall concept and the story you created for him I have the feeling that the dyes are not very well chosen. I actually like that you wanted to have contrast between the metal and the leather parts but especially the top piece has no metal parts at all so you could have maybe gone for something darker maybe? The brownish parts are looking sort of red maybe you could find a better brown- tone that is less on a red side and maybe you could replace the greenish parts with something more neutral looking? It's just a consideration ^^
Other than that I enjoy this look and the overal presentation is really great and desveres a solid gold from me!
|I really like that you went full in and pulled out the Victorian-esque pieces. And reading your story and following along with the screenies, he definitely looks like a sell sword sort of fellow, one I would not want to mess with.|
Hylek and AnaChronism are much much better than I could possibly be at dissecting the pieces and color and where things can be improved on, but I can add that the colors feel more bright than I might like, but still a very nice ensemble.
So glad you decided to share a look and enter the contest! Thanks so much for sharing!