|Overall a great upload, I like how much thought you put into the story and the screens|
I like her mousy looking haircolour in combiantion with the rest of the dyes, very natural looking
If it weren´t for the Steampunk Contest I might not even have criticized this (and to be fair you are not the only one stepping in that trap), but I acutally miss the Victorian Era aspect of Steampunk a bit; I mean, that´s the main idea behind Steampunk and I don´t really feel any Victorian vibes here clothingwise
But as I said, that is smth that you weren´t the only one guilty of and if I detach this look from the contest it is really a solid upload which is deserving of a gold
|I love the tenth screen so I vote gold. I don't care if someone criticize this presentation. Good job.|
|The story is quite cute and I really like your Asura. |
The armour looks pretty solid and I like the mixture between the different pieces you used.
Your screens are looking good, as well, I wouldn't call them crappy at all. The only compaint I am having is that your Asura seems to be so "far away" in some of your screens. Some closer screens would be awesome so I could enjoy the details of her look a little bit better :)
I have to agree that steampunk is a bit more than just some engines and mechanical stuff in general so I would have loved to see that aspect but it's really a minor detail and it doesn't change the fact that you delivered a solid look.
|Really nice look! She surely is adorable, her hair and the goggles look quirky and I find it refreshing to see this top piece as it is so rarely used|
While the dyes are really nice and natural I do miss a little smth to make it a bit more interesting, but that´s mostly nitpicking
I think she makes a nice addition to the contest, even though I have to agree with thunderstruck wholeheartedly about the Victorian aspect that a lot of people seem to dismiss
But that being said this remains a quirky little Asura, you put a lot of effort into the upload and therefore this is clearly a gold for me! ^^
|Ill echo the others to the extend that its doesnt scream "steampunk".|
That doesnt make it look any less awesome though!
I love that you chose subtle pieces and dyes to stick to a technical theme! She really looks like a tiny golemancer :D
Fixer-Upper wouldve been really cool with this outfit, but your weapons work very well too!
Gold from me too :)
|Omg! Thanks everyone!|
Everyone but Mithras (lol): I agree, it's not super steampunk, but other forms of -punk are allowed in this contest, so I could say this counts as industrial which is similar. :)
Mithras: It's unfortunate that I couldn't make that one my cover screen. Too sad (though it's sooooo cute!)
|A technical no-nonsense Golemancer.|
This is how I like my Asura.
Quirky, Cute, Technical, Practical and most of all not over-the-top Magitech.
I love the use of dyes and I'm especially in love with the Priory gloves adding that engineer-like vibe. (Of course not forgetting the goggles and the body but the gloves are truly essential to me in this armour-combination.)
I'm sure a Golemancer knows this already but gold is a great conductor and as such it's only fitting for me to assist you in your golemancy by sending you all the gold you need.
|It´s just the fact that you also explicitly mentioned steampunk in your description, that´s why I brought it up ^^|
|I did not write the rest of the screens, I do not like. I wrote that one of the screen 's most attracted my attention. I did not rate this presentation in terms of competition , but in terms of being very good.|
Your character has a climate Fallout. I see that the glove can have a nice cut. The colors show that your character alive and probably sometimes gets dirty up some oil.
|Kestrel, I think your screens have come a long long way! I quite, quite enjoyed these and especially the 7th one (overlooking the burning wreckage).|
And yep, while Steampunk is in the title, I was hoping to cover all the sort of "alternative" punk styles of a modern/historic/retro design for the contest.
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