|Nice parody of Deadpool :D|
I actually enjoyed the story and I as well like how every of your screens represents your story chronologically.
I think it's an interesting way to recreate his 'case' using the icy elements and it was a smart choice giving him white hair and beard :D
I am a little bit torn about the armour combination. I actaully like the chill and icy theme here and I think the Zodiac top was a very good job but there is a little bit too much Aetherblade- armour for my taste. Maybe some different boots would have worked as well? I like the Winter's Pressence though it's very fitting here.
Overall I think you did a good job and I like it :>
Thank you for your feedback. Regarding the heavy use of Aetherblade armor, I tried a different mix before and it just doesn't feel right. The Boots and Leggings have some obvious clipping issue. The Gloves can be replaced, but there is no current alternative that could tell a story on its own. The Aetherblade gloves make the body more Cyborg-like to contrast with the still human-like head. In the end, I deliberately choose balance over creativity and include the holographic SAB weapon skins to shake up the otherwise plain armor mix.
|Just saw the story on imgur rly nice! :)|