Shadow Clover
By Shizuma974 on April 6th, 2016 |
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Let me present you my Chronomancer, Momoka Ariyasu. She’s named after my favorite member of the Japanese idol group Momoiro Clover Z who's emblematic color is green.
Since most of my characters had bright colors, I decided to create a dark look for her. So this is my interpretation of the dark green theme. ^_^
I’ll be honest, her outfit is not complete yet. I don’t have the skin of the greatsword. One day I’ll have enough gold to buy it. :p
Comments
 TriggerSad Fashion Guru | I like the dyes, but there's too much of the same armor set being used in my opinion. Maybe if you put in a few pieces from different sets it would feel more unique. I do like the dye mix you used. Also maybe add more to the description? Right now I don't really get much context to why your character is dressed this way. |
| 2016-04-06 3:28 | |
 Shizuma974 Stylist | Thanks for your remarks TriggerSad. :) I'm new to this site and didn't finish all the descriptions of my characters :p About this look, I totally get your point. I think there's a lot of Carapace pieces in her look too but it's kind of difficult to choice something else since those pieces go so well together. :p |
| 2016-04-06 4:20 in reply to TriggerSad | |
 Pattou Fashion Guru | I really like the colors too ! It fits very well the greatsword (even though you don't have it) and it will be great once you'll be able do to more screens with it. I agree with Trigger, maybe try to use other pieces for some part (gloves and boots for exemple). Female human aren't that hard to dress. I would change the shoulders piece too, but that's only my opinion ^^' |
| 2016-04-06 5:27 | |
 Hylek Fashionista | After going through all of your looks, i will just comment here, but it counts for your other uploads too!!! First of all, your looks are all nice, but nothing too special. This is mainly caused by you using many pieces of one set (or even outfits). Its perfectly fine since its your taste and as i mentioned, all your looks are nice! The problem is, with your rather common themes you have to provide a good presentation in order to make up for it! Your descriptions seem to be quite good, no need to change much imo. But your screens leave much to be desired! You often have just 2 screens, from hero panel and from char select. Sure that is the best way to show us your look in neutral light and every look should have at least one of those screens to make the outfit clearly visible ... but you provide nothing else. No action screens, no nice locations, no play with lighting conditions and/or environment, emotes, weaponskills etc. I have never seen people who upload all their looks at once getting good votes. For the same reason as you probably, they rush all their uploads and take absolutely no time to take screenshots! Even if your looks are not the most original ones, they all are nice! Your colour-concepts are all great! You just need to present your looks well!!!! |
| 2016-04-06 9:46 | |
Shizuma974 Stylist | First of all, thanks for the advice. :) Secondly, I didn't came here for the "golds" so it's not a problem if people don't give me that. I thought it was fun to come here and share the little I have to offer as a "not so good player enjoying the fashion wars 2". Well, I hope I didn't misunderstood this place. Peace ^_^ |
| 2016-04-06 10:27 in reply to Hylek | |
Hylek Fashionista | Well i surely dont mind you being here, its just that the site is about presenting looks in a great way, for me at least. If you dont have the ambition to get all the Golds im totally fine with that. Its just a bit of a waste to me, cuz your looks a quite nice and with pretty screens you couldve gotten quite good votes i think :S |
| 2016-04-06 13:05 in reply to Shizuma974 |
