|I'd recommend bringing in some of the green from the backpack if you're intent on keeping it! Just for the accents, not as a major color, something like Mint dye or something less bright green than that.|
As for shoulders I think the Masquerade Mantle would flow better with the hood and I'd suggest simpler styled boots like Apprentice Shoes. Also maybe different gloves because the Lawless Gloves look extra bulky. Perhaps something Incarnate Gloves?
Also as far as places to take more pictures I can recommend the little graveyard in the Ascalon Settlement in Gendarran Fields, or some of the Ascalon Ruins? If you have Heart of Throns, maybe try taking screen caps in some of the burning airships. Would love to see more pictures after you make some tweaks!
What about Whisper back piece (Initiate's Pack • Agent's Pack • Lightbringer's Pack) ?
And what about change shoulder to Ascalon and put the chain in green?